Not Bad.
1, That totally fing rocked.
2, for this its ok for Zero to be a girl, cause, you made the storyline that way.
3, we could work together sometime, gimme a uh, call for the msn thing or whatever, We could have a k.a. movie, you know, maybe a more actiony and maybe a little humor.
4, what i mean by actiony, is that you didnt have much action, but i give you credit for trying. But there could be as time that they kick his A$$ that way, he MAY come back to life later on, or whatever your choice is, so, gimme a ... response... and we may be able to work together, im working on my second peice it was going to be a sonicy megamannish type thing, but. you think about.